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Derpy Hooves by Daedric-Pony Derpy Hooves by Daedric-Pony
Feedback is much loved. ^^

If you feel like critiquing, I prefer it to be blunt and to the point. Don't omit anything for the sake of politeness.
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:iconwendy-the-creeper:
This is a very very nice picture of Derpy! She just looks so happy and cheerful in this picture!

I absolutely love the colors you used here. Using warm, happy yellows really makes the piece have that sunny look about it. The lens flare is also a nice touch as well. For the most part, you handled the lighting well on Derpy.

My biggest concern about this picture is that bent leg in the front there. It just doesn't seem long enough, because I don't think there's enough of the upper part of the leg suggested there. Whatever it is, the leg seems short in comparison to the rest of the legs.

Other than that, your piece is pretty fine.
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:iconthatponylover26:
Thatponylover26 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Derpy has 1 eye up and one eye down just saying but awesome art :)
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:iconblazie-blaze:
Blazie-Blaze Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy is god. It's all you need to know about her.
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:icontomfraggle:
TomFraggle Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Like your Derpy drawing. :)
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:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So awesome Derpy ^^
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:iconnintendolover2010:
nintendolover2010 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Awesome job! :D
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
I really love it! <3
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:iconstarmic:
starmic Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
beautiful
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:icon72-hours-remain:
72-Hours-Remain Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
not bad for a speed paint, although 4 hours is still a long time for one, try doing some 30 min gesusture drawings the help alot
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:icondaedric-pony:
Daedric-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Consider it done! Thanks for the advice. ^^
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:iconheffatos:
HeFFatos Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The finished work looks much better than the sketch. It looks really good as for 4 hours; gosh, I spend like 15-30 hours or even more on mine too =D.

I like this drawing. Her pose is great (just like the overall flow of her body - it's very dynamic) and her mane looks very good. The "sunset" background and the lights on pony are well-done - it really looks like a sunset effect.

Still, even if I like this work, when I look at it I feel something is amiss. After a while I figured out what:
Tongues are usually lighter than mouths. Try to invert those colours next time. Her eyes seems to be too big and I've got a feeling they are about to drop off her head (maybe it's just me?). I also think her angelic wings don't go well with her - those feathers are very think and the wings look too fragile to hold an adult pony.

And I guess that's everything. It really looks good and much better than your previous recent mlp works.

Also, there is a troll at the bottom of this page, MochaPK - he really can't draw even quarter good as you and he's jealous. Well, I think oblivion isn't a good place for you at all. Such comments with no explanation why somebody doesn't like one's work are pointless.
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Daedric-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really really do appreciate it. You could have submitted that as a critique, it's very well thought out. ^^

Also MochaPK is my friend, he's just referencing where my username came from.
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:iconblackdragonthebad:
blackdragonthebad Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
The shading is good but her expression is lifeless and she's not derping.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
And what's the big fuss if it's "lifeless" either? It's only a picture, after all.
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:iconblackdragonthebad:
blackdragonthebad Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
The expression is lifeless.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Again, what's the big fuss? It's just a f---in' picture. :facepalm:
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:iconblackdragonthebad:
blackdragonthebad Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Ugh, all pictures aren't lifeless. You obviously know nothing about art.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
So what if I don't? It doesn't matter anyway.
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:iconblackdragonthebad:
blackdragonthebad Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
You should just get off dA, you have no reason to be here. I think youtube is your place.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Yeah sure, I am going to remain here and you can just lump it.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
This explains why she's not "derping": [link]
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:iconmaxthelagomorph:
MaxtheLagomorph Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Needs more Sam and Max.
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:icondaedric-pony:
Daedric-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
I think you might be in the wrong fan base. XD
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:iconmaxthelagomorph:
MaxtheLagomorph Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
I know what fanbase I posted! ARE YOU QUESTIONING MY INFALLIBLE LOGIC?
:iconmaxplz:
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:icondaedric-pony:
Daedric-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Indeed I am dear fellow! I fear you may have gone mad! Perhaps you should lie down for a bit.
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:iconmaxthelagomorph:
MaxtheLagomorph Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
MAD?
I'M NOT MAD YOU'RE MAD!
THE WHOLE DAMN WORLD IS MAD!
hold on a second...
Sam told me to calm down.
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KatieFitness Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh pretty!
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:iconwonderboltfanrainbow:
COOL! Speed..paint:? wow nice done!:D and cute 'normal' eye's LOL
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:icondaedric-pony:
Daedric-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Digital Artist
They had to be looking toward the open space for compositional reasons. XD I couldn't get it to look good with her wall-eyed, but I did try. ^^
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:iconwonderboltfanrainbow:
It's great! and 4 hours.. the last drawing I did was ... 8 hours LOL I am not that good... have to practice more though... had a Wacom for Celestia-days..(Christmass LOL)so yeah I am not yet familiar ... the Dash vs tank compilation I did now of screenshots is just fun.. one of them I need to try to draw.. idk which pic yet....:DYour doing awsome!
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Cjbronyten Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
thats pretty good:)
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:iconjoioijoihoijioho:
joioijoihoijioho Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, this is awesome~!
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:iconmochaziiia:
MochaziIIa Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
:iconrainbowdashlouderplz: :iconspeechbubbleplz: BACK TO OBLIVION WITH YOU, DAEDRIC PONY
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