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Feedback is much loved. ^^

If you feel like critiquing, I prefer it to be blunt and to the point. Don't omit anything for the sake of politeness.
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Critique by ~Wendy-the-Creeper Jan 29, 2013, 5:13:33 AM
This is a very very nice picture of Derpy! She just looks so happy and cheerful in this picture!

I absolutely love the colors you used here. Using warm, happy yellows really makes the piece have that sunny look about it. The lens flare is also a nice touch as well. For the most part, you handled the lighting well on Derpy.

My biggest concern about this picture is that bent leg in the front there. It just doesn't seem long enough, because I don't think there's enough of the upper part of the leg suggested there. Whatever it is, the leg seems short in comparison to the rest of the legs.

Other than that, your piece is pretty fine.
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~Helsaabi Feb 1, 2013
I really love it! <3
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~starmic Jan 30, 2013
beautiful
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~72-Hours-Remain Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
not bad for a speed paint, although 4 hours is still a long time for one, try doing some 30 min gesusture drawings the help alot
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*Daedric-Pony Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Consider it done! Thanks for the advice. ^^
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~HeFFatos Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The finished work looks much better than the sketch. It looks really good as for 4 hours; gosh, I spend like 15-30 hours or even more on mine too =D.

I like this drawing. Her pose is great (just like the overall flow of her body - it's very dynamic) and her mane looks very good. The "sunset" background and the lights on pony are well-done - it really looks like a sunset effect.

Still, even if I like this work, when I look at it I feel something is amiss. After a while I figured out what:
Tongues are usually lighter than mouths. Try to invert those colours next time. Her eyes seems to be too big and I've got a feeling they are about to drop off her head (maybe it's just me?). I also think her angelic wings don't go well with her - those feathers are very think and the wings look too fragile to hold an adult pony.

And I guess that's everything. It really looks good and much better than your previous recent mlp works.

Also, there is a troll at the bottom of this page, MochaPK - he really can't draw even quarter good as you and he's jealous. Well, I think oblivion isn't a good place for you at all. Such comments with no explanation why somebody doesn't like one's work are pointless.
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*Daedric-Pony Jan 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really really do appreciate it. You could have submitted that as a critique, it's very well thought out. ^^

Also MochaPK is my friend, he's just referencing where my username came from.
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~blackdragonthebad Jan 28, 2013
The shading is good but her expression is lifeless and she's not derping.
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~punkrocksavedmylife Jan 29, 2013
And what's the big fuss if it's "lifeless" either? It's only a picture, after all.
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~blackdragonthebad Jan 29, 2013
The expression is lifeless.
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
~punkrocksavedmylife Jan 29, 2013
Again, what's the big fuss? It's just a f---in' picture. :facepalm:
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